Very beautiful piece. I wish I was there in that meditative space. Sometimes it is so hard to turn it all off and just be. Thank you for the reminder of the necessity of just being.
You know, I had read somewhere that getting into meditative space even for a few seconds is very difficult. Guess we must all keep letting go rather than trying, and then we will be..
I know the implications of an open door. When its open because some one left without care, opportunity, fear and panic(when it is not wanted or expected) but I would not have thought of them if you had not written this. excellent idea.
Happy Halloween to you. Hope to see you at our poetry potluck Halloween party tonight. Post a poem on Halloween, or share an old poem unrelated to the theme, link in as soon as we are open, that’s how you get the best result of feedback. Feel free to take any awards from this post, enjoy! xxx
It indeed a state of silence. Strikingly done!
ReplyDeleteHi Alkaline,
ReplyDeleteThis is my first visit to your blog.
'Sound is a harsh interruption
in the transparent wave of silence...'
Very nice lines. A lovely piece of writing.
an honest peace
ReplyDeleteThanks Diane, Paul, Rene.
ReplyDeleteThis piece was written in just 10 minutes of a meditative state.
Perfect! I love this.
ReplyDeleteMoving...
ReplyDeleteLoved the last para :)
ReplyDeleteGorgeous bit of writing. Loved this.
ReplyDeleteDeborah, Berowne, thanks for your kind words!
ReplyDeleteUma, the last para is what it's all about. Thanx.
Willow, I always look forward to your comment:)
Very beautiful piece. I wish I was there in that meditative space. Sometimes it is so hard to turn it all off and just be. Thank you for the reminder of the necessity of just being.
ReplyDeleteKristen, this was an inspiring prompt. Thanx.
ReplyDeleteYou know, I had read somewhere that getting into meditative space even for a few seconds is very difficult. Guess we must all keep letting go rather than trying, and then we will be..
Superb...
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ah how very zen...silence is a friend....nice magpie.
ReplyDeleteYou nailed it...
ReplyDelete"A state of being.
Just
being."
I liked those lines a lot...:):)
Gautami, Brian, ET, glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteno words needed after yours;-) great magpie
ReplyDeleteBeautiful. A wonderful Magpie!
ReplyDelete"This light does not need colours" is so beautiful.
ReplyDeleteLovely!
striking words... well written is the 'transparent wave of silence'
ReplyDeleteNice magpie.
I know the implications of an open door. When its open because some one left without care, opportunity, fear and panic(when it is not wanted or expected) but I would not have thought of them if you had not written this. excellent idea.
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ReplyDeleteHappy Halloween to you.
Hope to see you at our poetry potluck Halloween party tonight. Post a poem on Halloween, or share an old poem unrelated to the theme, link in as soon as we are open, that’s how you get the best result of feedback.
Feel free to take any awards from this post, enjoy!
xxx
I loved this! Beautifully written!
ReplyDeletethanks folks..
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