Microfiction is such a challenge! You held the picture for 24 hours and, in a few words, captured exactly what I was feeling about it. Please do keep coming back!
The thing about micro-fiction is that it also takes a certain kind of audience to imagine the entire story around those few words.. unlike an image which immediately conveys something to most.
Thanks for dropping in Jessica. This story is about something that is totally new in another culture..outside our experience.. like that boy who lives in a black and white world, and comes across 'color' - which is outside his previous experience.
What an amazing story! Yes it does take a certain kind of readership, imaginative and creative enough to build up a crescendo ... this is merely a launching pad. An absolute gem.
Microfiction is such a challenge! You held the picture for 24 hours and, in a few words, captured exactly what I was feeling about it. Please do keep coming back!
ReplyDeleteAmy Barlow Liberatore
Thanks Amy!
ReplyDeleteThat was clever and brilliant...
ReplyDeleteBrainy you:):)
Thanks ET! I still remember that moment when the story flashed across my mind.
ReplyDeleteYes the body language does suggest wonder!
ReplyDeleteThanks Stafford.
ReplyDeleteThe thing about micro-fiction is that it also takes a certain kind of audience to imagine the entire story around those few words.. unlike an image which immediately conveys something to most.
Wonderful! I love what you have done with this. :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Su!
ReplyDeleteSuch an excellent example of the value of pondering before speaking/writing.
ReplyDeleteha ha, i like it.
ReplyDeleteMicrofiction indeed.
On saying that you captured what was gong on in this picture really well.
cool ^^
ReplyDeleteThanks.. Shawnbird, Clarebook, artwebshow.
ReplyDelete'The sky is always bluer on the other side'?
ReplyDeleteThanks for your visit to my site.
Thanks for dropping in Jessica. This story is about something that is totally new in another culture..outside our experience.. like that boy who lives in a black and white world, and comes across 'color' - which is outside his previous experience.
ReplyDeleteWhat an amazing story! Yes it does take a certain kind of readership, imaginative and creative enough to build up a crescendo ... this is merely a launching pad. An absolute gem.
ReplyDeleteThanks for your appreciation, Max.
DeleteWow! 'Wonder'ful Al! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Deeps :)
DeleteWow! 'Wonder'ful Al! :)
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