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Tuesday
Monalisa speaking
It's just ... a smile
the kind i'd give you on the street
in passing
at peace with the world
absence-of-thoughts
ready to look upon you kindly
that sort of smile..
(this is a flash poem-in-5-minutes ... might expand, rework later)
I wouldn't change a thing. A sweet. peaceful take on the prompt. Somethings defy editing. Vb
ReplyDeleteOh no ... no rework required! I loved this.
ReplyDeleteThis is perfect as it is. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteLove it just as is. Has a cool and breezy feel to it. Thanks for visiting my blog!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Vb, Marilyn, Lola, Helen..
ReplyDeleteAh, a casual smile! Nicely done...
ReplyDeleteSolid start of what could be an excellent poem.
ReplyDeleteAn expanded write would be something to look forward to.
ReplyDeleteLove it, beautifully done :)
ReplyDeleteShort Poems