Let's walk a little, talk a little, sing a little, rock a little
This is absolutely fabulous.
Succinct and impacting. I loved it.
A rapier move.
liked the impact of the contrast...rob kistnerImage & Verse
I hope it was a disarming smile.Poetry24…where news is the Muse
"armed with only a smile" - I love it, love the poem!
This is excellent.
Perfect!
Potent tracings of understanding. Nice!
Thanx folks, for visiting and commenting. I've dropped in on your blogs too!
"...armed with only a smile"...so often all we really need. This is great!
This is brilliant! Love it!Anna :o]PS It made me smile!
Brilliant.
Touche! An easy victory for him.
Thanks Anna, Tess, Shari. Shari, 'him'? its nothing personal :-) I usually prefer to write in the first person as that makes the poem / story come out more authentic.
... a Mona Lisa smile! Nicely done.
Less is more, give me a smile any day!
Every word carefully chosen. Every word a perfect fit. All muscle, no fat. Great job! Vb
The smile would have trumped the sword I think :) well written..!Here's My Magpie
Love this....:-):-)
And what happened next?? Nice mag!
Everything captured in just two lines!! Great work :)
I agree with the others...perfectly summed up in two lines.
A smile can be disarming.
I agree with Tumblewords and Tess, this is "absolutely brilliant"!!!
This is absolutely fabulous.
ReplyDeleteSuccinct and impacting. I loved it.
ReplyDeleteA rapier move.
ReplyDeleteliked the impact of the contrast...
ReplyDeleterob kistner
Image & Verse
I hope it was a disarming smile.
ReplyDeletePoetry24…where news is the Muse
"armed with only a smile" - I love it, love the poem!
ReplyDeleteThis is excellent.
ReplyDeletePerfect!
ReplyDeletePotent tracings of understanding. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThanx folks, for visiting and commenting. I've dropped in on your blogs too!
ReplyDelete"...armed with only a smile"...so often all we really need. This is great!
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliant! Love it!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
PS It made me smile!
Brilliant.
ReplyDeleteTouche! An easy victory for him.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anna, Tess, Shari.
ReplyDeleteShari, 'him'? its nothing personal :-) I usually prefer to write in the first person as that makes the poem / story come out more authentic.
... a Mona Lisa smile! Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteLess is more, give me a smile any day!
ReplyDeleteEvery word carefully chosen. Every word a perfect fit. All muscle, no fat. Great job! Vb
ReplyDeleteThe smile would have trumped the sword I think :) well written..!
ReplyDeleteHere's My Magpie
Love this....:-):-)
ReplyDeleteAnd what happened next?? Nice mag!
ReplyDeleteEverything captured in just two lines!! Great work :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with the others...perfectly summed up in two lines.
ReplyDeleteA smile can be disarming.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Tumblewords and Tess, this is "absolutely brilliant"!!!
ReplyDeleteI agree with Tumblewords and Tess, this is "absolutely brilliant"!!!
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