Let's walk a little, talk a little, sing a little, rock a little
This is absolutely fabulous.
Succinct and impacting. I loved it.
A rapier move.
liked the impact of the contrast...rob kistnerImage & Verse
I hope it was a disarming smile.Poetry24…where news is the Muse
"armed with only a smile" - I love it, love the poem!
This is excellent.
Potent tracings of understanding. Nice!
Thanx folks, for visiting and commenting. I've dropped in on your blogs too!
"...armed with only a smile"...so often all we really need. This is great!
This is brilliant! Love it!Anna :o]PS It made me smile!
Touche! An easy victory for him.
Thanks Anna, Tess, Shari. Shari, 'him'? its nothing personal :-) I usually prefer to write in the first person as that makes the poem / story come out more authentic.
... a Mona Lisa smile! Nicely done.
Less is more, give me a smile any day!
Every word carefully chosen. Every word a perfect fit. All muscle, no fat. Great job! Vb
The smile would have trumped the sword I think :) well written..!Here's My Magpie
And what happened next?? Nice mag!
Everything captured in just two lines!! Great work :)
I agree with the others...perfectly summed up in two lines.
A smile can be disarming.
I agree with Tumblewords and Tess, this is "absolutely brilliant"!!!