tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post5519980553497356802..comments2023-10-19T08:58:58.342-07:00Comments on Between Silences: The killing fieldsindiwriterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01869142617068567153noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-20754363105673521942010-11-09T09:54:55.330-08:002010-11-09T09:54:55.330-08:00Very true, jackjericho.Very true, jackjericho.indiwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01869142617068567153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-13019423069266838152010-11-08T01:11:34.152-08:002010-11-08T01:11:34.152-08:00Alakaline, a lovely piece and beautifully written....Alakaline, a lovely piece and beautifully written. A sad subjectAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-63716790007218654352010-11-06T15:20:22.952-07:002010-11-06T15:20:22.952-07:00Thought proving. Simple poem and very meaningful. ...Thought proving. Simple poem and very meaningful. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-16558481019147697672010-11-06T13:24:51.320-07:002010-11-06T13:24:51.320-07:00great piece. makes you think about your theme and ...great piece. makes you think about your theme and subject. poignant...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-12711658154096452162010-11-06T12:30:05.923-07:002010-11-06T12:30:05.923-07:00Very wonderful... I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing...Very wonderful... I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing...<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय <br />Om Namah Shivaya <br />Twitter: @VerseEveryDay <br />Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.comShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-13011570988974583212010-11-06T11:01:03.395-07:002010-11-06T11:01:03.395-07:00Thanks Sumit.Thanks Sumit.indiwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01869142617068567153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-7621002928294133682010-11-06T07:19:02.642-07:002010-11-06T07:19:02.642-07:00I love this...
especially the last two lines...
am...I love this...<br />especially the last two lines...<br />amazing :)eyeographyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05508519847517495863noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-7369179913411971242010-11-06T06:09:10.990-07:002010-11-06T06:09:10.990-07:00hey, thanx all..
@sugaryichigo: the person griev...hey, thanx all.. <br /><br />@sugaryichigo: the person grieves precisely because something that they wanted to happen, never can happen anymore..and that is why the question.indiwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01869142617068567153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-12962230735492037142010-11-06T00:47:15.095-07:002010-11-06T00:47:15.095-07:00But never-born children –
How do you bury those?
...But never-born children –<br />How do you bury those?<br /><br />How do you grieve for something that never happened? Thought-provoking. :)<br /><br />Yuuki-chan:<br />http://sugaryichigo.wordpress.com/2010/11/06/gedankenblitze/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-88431729272355583052010-11-05T22:00:36.051-07:002010-11-05T22:00:36.051-07:00this is truly an amazing poem.this is truly an amazing poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-88633868236704247052010-11-05T17:38:29.937-07:002010-11-05T17:38:29.937-07:00you painted the image of a blood drenched killing ...you painted the image of a blood drenched killing field... must say excellent work<br /><br />.Mase Da Rula.<br />A Ruler's Kingdom<br />http://dieselfromthad.wordpress.comAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-84304745947646605972010-11-05T11:29:26.500-07:002010-11-05T11:29:26.500-07:00this is painful, how does one bury the unborn?this is painful, how does one bury the unborn?marithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05116189898401307852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-86726258533243068212010-11-05T11:28:13.757-07:002010-11-05T11:28:13.757-07:00the ending is so powerful... it hits the reader......the ending is so powerful... it hits the reader... beautifully writtenRajlakshmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05947753574286557864noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-54791273083024088492010-11-05T09:25:21.060-07:002010-11-05T09:25:21.060-07:00Really understated, which I like. You take few wor...Really understated, which I like. You take few words to say something so meaningful; I'm so impressed!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-14697183395865005182010-11-05T08:36:04.806-07:002010-11-05T08:36:04.806-07:00But never-born children –
How do you bury those......But never-born children –<br />How do you bury those...<br /><br /><br />super empowering lines,<br />masterfully done.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-66963003159514109472010-11-05T08:30:04.420-07:002010-11-05T08:30:04.420-07:00Thanks, Anita and Leo.
Hedgewitch, I appreciate ...Thanks, Anita and Leo. <br /><br />Hedgewitch, I appreciate the question you have raised. I too often wonder how much to add to a poem and how much to leave out. This one began with many more details. That seemed a trifle dull.. so the chopping and chiseling. Now it is more to do with the reader than the poet.indiwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01869142617068567153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-48505567484804403112010-11-05T07:58:39.401-07:002010-11-05T07:58:39.401-07:00Very concentrated and a solid conclusion, but I...Very concentrated and a solid conclusion, but I'm left wanting just a little more context-who, where, how, etc somewhere to focus the cause and effect. Still, better to have a short and concise poem where the reader is left with questions than spelling it out and losing the impetus.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-69020708377961641522010-11-05T07:25:05.184-07:002010-11-05T07:25:05.184-07:00very questioning poetry, deep and touching.. well ...very questioning poetry, deep and touching.. well written Alakaline!<br /><br /><a href="http://leonnyes.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/inspiration/" rel="nofollow">Rally Week 32, My Entry</a>Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-23487613227905533612010-11-05T05:23:02.472-07:002010-11-05T05:23:02.472-07:00Thought provoking words so well written.
Anita.Thought provoking words so well written.<br /><br />Anita.Anita Magdalenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17759774477028333590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-81016547327858497202010-07-12T21:08:37.535-07:002010-07-12T21:08:37.535-07:00A mother knows the pain of a lost child; God knows...A mother knows the pain of a lost child; God knows the pain of a dead creation! Beautiful put!<br />[my poetry at:<br />http://diaryoffreedom.tk/ ]Rupamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11502540907897172446noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-73392163657617713132010-06-16T09:20:04.787-07:002010-06-16T09:20:04.787-07:00Thanks Nithin.
The poem has only one focus. Of c...Thanks Nithin. <br /><br />The poem has only one focus. Of course interpretations can vary, but the 'baby' here is of mental origin rather than physical.indiwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01869142617068567153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-8391073729682186112010-06-16T03:18:17.682-07:002010-06-16T03:18:17.682-07:00This poem touched on two different aspects.One the...This poem touched on two different aspects.One the agony of losing a baby before birth,while other one touched the broken dreams.Small but very stimulating poetry.Nithin RShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04210200269352572628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-48405208616884583622010-06-16T02:08:00.092-07:002010-06-16T02:08:00.092-07:00Anita, Bindhu,
Thanks.Anita, Bindhu,<br />Thanks.indiwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01869142617068567153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-53491113244405905102010-06-15T08:28:14.117-07:002010-06-15T08:28:14.117-07:00Deep and touching!Deep and touching!Bindhu Unnyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15188876952238550620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13133010.post-70412769912339711582010-06-15T03:45:05.869-07:002010-06-15T03:45:05.869-07:00Rather wonderful, Alaka and with a flat and painfu...Rather wonderful, Alaka and with a flat and painful longing.scribehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04087236556146482746noreply@blogger.com