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The Poem

I crafted a poem
with the gleam of a pearl
the salty tang of a teardrop
its length the wisp of hair
tucked behind an earshell.

Some only said-
This is too short.
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2 comments:

  1. Harvee9:07 AM

    I have had this comments on my poetry too - too short! I do like the images in the poem.

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  2. Manic8:53 AM

    Concise and perfectly rounded – a wee jewel of a poem.

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