Let's walk a little, talk a little, sing a little, rock a little
I wouldn't change a thing. A sweet. peaceful take on the prompt. Somethings defy editing. Vb
Oh no ... no rework required! I loved this.
This is perfect as it is. Wonderful.
Love it just as is. Has a cool and breezy feel to it. Thanks for visiting my blog!
Thanks, Vb, Marilyn, Lola, Helen..
Ah, a casual smile! Nicely done...
Solid start of what could be an excellent poem.
An expanded write would be something to look forward to.
Love it, beautifully done :)Short Poems