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Tuesday

Monalisa speaking

It's just ... a smile
the kind i'd give you on the street
in passing
at peace with the world
absence-of-thoughts
ready to look upon you kindly
that sort of smile..

(this is a flash poem-in-5-minutes ... might expand, rework later)

Magpie Tales prompt

9 comments:

  1. I wouldn't change a thing. A sweet. peaceful take on the prompt. Somethings defy editing. Vb

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  2. Oh no ... no rework required! I loved this.

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  3. This is perfect as it is. Wonderful.

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  4. Love it just as is. Has a cool and breezy feel to it. Thanks for visiting my blog!

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  5. Thanks, Vb, Marilyn, Lola, Helen..

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  6. Ah, a casual smile! Nicely done...

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  7. Solid start of what could be an excellent poem.

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  8. An expanded write would be something to look forward to.

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  9. Love it, beautifully done :)
    Short Poems

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