Let's walk a little, talk a little, sing a little, rock a little
beautiful and true !
I love it. Well done
cute piece...http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-moods-feelings-and.htmlwelcome do a contribution to potluck week 10...claim award from my entry #160.
Smouldering can be dangerous...
:-) Jinsky, maybe I should rename it as 'ticking timebombs'? cheerz,
No jazz for me tonight...Very catchy! I enjoyed the rhythm and the beauty of this poem. Keep writing! Dan
3 lines and you managed to say what I could only say in a whole post.Really amazing :)
hey, thanx Sugary.. initially I also used to take 'whole posts' to say something.. you get better with time and practice..:)
I love when people can put something that is so well explained in a few words. I have yet to master that
Thanks Vera! am sure you'll be able to do that too..
Oh...that's just lovely.