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Half finished conversations
lie smouldering
with might-have-beens

12 comments:

  1. I love it. Well done

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  2. cute piece...

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-moods-feelings-and.html

    welcome do a contribution to potluck week 10...
    claim award from my entry #160.

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  3. Smouldering can be dangerous...

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  4. :-) Jinsky, maybe I should rename it as 'ticking timebombs'?

    cheerz,

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  5. No jazz for me tonight...Very catchy! I enjoyed the rhythm and the beauty of this poem. Keep writing! Dan

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  6. 3 lines and you managed to say what I could only say in a whole post.
    Really amazing :)

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  7. hey, thanx Sugary.. initially I also used to take 'whole posts' to say something.. you get better with time and practice..:)

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  8. I love when people can put something that is so well explained in a few words. I have yet to master that

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  9. Thanks Vera! am sure you'll be able to do that too..

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  10. Oh...that's just lovely.

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