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Sunday

A Himalayan Trail


 

Cloud ensconced endless stone

Brooding pines edge 

immense spaces

Intermittent whistle
 
of a white-collared blackbird
 
skims the cold foamy stream
 
Feet meet wildflowers

I, am not.

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11 comments:

  1. Lovely trail, the ending is great!

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  2. Anonymous8:45 AM

    Yes, the ending adds much to it. I like the description too.


    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/04/18/my-favourite-things-not/

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  3. Anonymous10:32 AM

    o! what a journey in your words! I enjoyed it immensely :)

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/14/in-remission/

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  4. Breath taking in a land that high in altitude. Enjoyed the trip. Great job.

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  5. Anonymous1:15 PM

    Lovely poem and a nice photo too

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  6. Thanks, Krisse, Jess, Jingle, Lynn, Kid, Dunstan.

    I had clicked that photo on a Himalayan trail. Those places are so difficult to put into words..

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  7. Anonymous8:40 AM

    this is lovely :)

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  8. Anonymous11:14 AM

    nicely worded.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

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  9. perfect! thank you!


    Luna


    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

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  10. a beautiful poem with a beuatiful picture. thanks for sharing

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