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Sunday

A Himalayan Trail


 

Cloud ensconced endless stone

Brooding pines edge 

immense spaces

Intermittent whistle
 
of a white-collared blackbird
 
skims the cold foamy stream
 
Feet meet wildflowers

I, am not.

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12 comments:

  1. Lovely trail, the ending is great!

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  2. Yes, the ending adds much to it. I like the description too.


    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/04/18/my-favourite-things-not/

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  3. beautiful word tour.

    well done.
    A++

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  4. o! what a journey in your words! I enjoyed it immensely :)

    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2011/04/14/in-remission/

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  5. Breath taking in a land that high in altitude. Enjoyed the trip. Great job.

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  6. Lovely poem and a nice photo too

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  7. Beautifully said

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  8. Thanks, Krisse, Jess, Jingle, Lynn, Kid, Dunstan.

    I had clicked that photo on a Himalayan trail. Those places are so difficult to put into words..

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  9. nicely worded.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/22/springtide/

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  10. perfect! thank you!


    Luna


    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

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  11. a beautiful poem with a beuatiful picture. thanks for sharing

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