Sunday
Between
Sometimes I live between
the purple sighs of dusk and dawn
bubbles on water that slowly dissolve
drowsy buzz of a summer bee
at the end of a hung up call
in dark matter
in a time warp
between skew lines
and then at times between
dha nee re ga
© Alaka Yeravadekar
Dha Nee Re Ga are key notes of raag Yaman Kalyan in Indian Classical Music.
(This poem published by Fullosia Press)
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Good one !
ReplyDelete"Between skewed lines"...
nice concept
Thanks Trinath :)
ReplyDeleteLoved each line...each with such a rich image!
ReplyDeleteThe first two lines stirred vivid emotions in me. Absolutely lovely!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written. I love the images, especially in the first stanza: "between / the purple sighs of dusk and dawn".
ReplyDeleteLyrical...love the flow.
ReplyDeletebeautiful!
ReplyDeleteincredible.
ReplyDeleteelegant word flow.
ReplyDeletebeautiful. loved the flow of it.
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