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Wednesday

The fossil

Yesterday,
I pulled out love
crumpled and creased

buried beneath
your ironed shirts
the children’s socks
and potato peelings
 ~

7 comments:

  1. Nice :) Story of so many lives. But even under the debris of potato peels it seems to stay live!!

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  2. hmm, thx Suniti... it's mostly women who respond to this one tho :)

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  3. This is like a soft blow that causes internal damage lol. Your use or language was almost delicate but...Whew...the feeling behind it!

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  4. True love does look beyond and actually enjoy those everyday things or that's been my experience.

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  5. Nicely written and so much said in few words. The lives of families are in the telling.

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  6. Nicely said--I love the simplicity of this piece!

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